So, as per my last post, here's approximately what my query looked like back in the day. I'm using 'Aliens' as an example instead of my actual book, which is still on sub (go go go lil novel! u can do eet!)
As per the structure I described previously:
- What does the main character want and why might we want to read about it?
- Bit of back story, and how the back story might feed into book events
- Prevention of getting what she wants (based on back story, and current events)
- Who might...